Peer Edit

Jon Perkins
1. Yes there is.
2. The Op-Ed does state both. The solution is basically encouraging everyone to take action in abolishment of hate crime laws.
3. There are counter arguments. One of them include stats on crimes against women.
4. A bit interesting, but it's not surprising.
5. The paragraphs are organized. I don't see how they can be in any order.
6. Yes the paragraphs do.
7. I thought the writing was clear and had a good point.

Jeff Curry
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